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Nice attempt - please change Curt to Kurt in the title, it sounds odd.
The feelings you have expressed are potent, they rise above the usual
teeny-bopper hormonal gushes that often mimic poetry but fall short -
at the same time your choice of words, turns the lyrical content to something
mundane, words like cynicism which is usually an antithesis to poetry.
If you are seriously looking at penning poetry that would sound and feel far more
sober, let me reproduce some samples here exactly on this topic, love for someone
whom you knew so well and yet you didn't. This is not criticism, I am writing these
lines to suggest alternative routes.