Responses

Tuesday, June 2018

 

Response or no response

one shouldn't feel tense

one should agree on this point

His or her poems should be painted with poetry colors

 

One doesn't write to please someone

but to strengthen

the close bonds with the readers

and if possible render some service as the writer

 

as we go in for supporting newcomers

there remains no consideration for the writer

he does it with one aim of giving an encouragement

so some attention or no attention makes no adverse moment

 

if "post one and comment two" is implemented

I think, some kind of bond towards writing, might be developed

it is not the question of who comments on what

the reader develops the skill and brilliantly not caught

 

I invite long discussion

but there remains no confusion

it is bond or relation

that puts new and new additions

 

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

 

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